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January 19, 2010
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Needed more "sexy" in my gallery.


Painter: 4 hours
Vampire guyİRJ Palmer
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First: VERY impressive face. very painterly, a lot of subtle color, love the purple on his chick, the little orange on the nose bridge, very nice indeed. The face is probably the strongest point of the entire painting, as it should be. You come a long way from flat cell shading colors.

The diagonal composition is well planed out, especially the background, very solid, simple but mysterious.

The biggest problem of this painting is the foreground wood panel. It's so smooth, so perfect, feels like completely out of place, and because it's the foreground, it forces the viewer to look at it, but doesn't offer anything interesting to look at. The first thing I see is, of course, the impressive face. After that, my eyes jump to the wood panel, and....eh.....what the hell is that?! you running out of time or patience or something?! LOL~ seriously, that flat wood panel just bothers me to no end. and those very nicely rendered fingers doesn't help either.

I feel that everything flashy are good, the clothing, the wood panel, not as good. I don't know if you want to keep working on it, but if you do, I'd say keep working on that wood door/panel, give it more texture, more color, something interesting to look at, maybe some scratch marks. Give me something to look at after I'm done admiring that scary face~
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:iconresidentfrankenstein:
Now this is a vampire! I really like the shine on his black fingernails, great work. He looks ready to devour, hopefully, Edward.
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~T-razz Jan 26, 2010  Student Digital Artist
neat R.j
I really like the expression!
I would only say to define the cloth at his neck!
But then it also goes with the mood!
awesome work overall! :clap:

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Mood: Lmao ~rinisart Jan 22, 2010  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Nice. you have made my month.

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:iconsepapa-san:
Good work :)

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:iconjeffburjr:
About time he showed his true face.

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KRAZIE!!!

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~MysticAcademy Jan 21, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Take THAT, you Twilight fans! Posers, the lot of ya!

THIS is a vampire. A creature of the night. For the win. Great work, mate. Truly great.

:iconenterplz::iconedwardcullenrapeface::iconexitplz: <---- is anyone else ROFLing at this? XD

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Mood: Llama ~Blackdragonheart Jan 21, 2010  Student General Artist
LOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!!! :laughing: You made my day. Thank You! :onfire:

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:iconvladimiravich:
OWNAGE!!!!!

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:iconblues-on10:
Well now we know what the REAL twilight edward would look like.

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Stupid Adventures of Link (LoZ Parody Comic) in my gallery. :)
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