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This was the first homework assignment for my perspective class. It was a good deal of fun to work in isometric perspective. We were graded on amount of detail and accuracy of the perspective, i ended up with an A on this. Its a concept i had for a town topped steam boat that acts as a moving port in a great marsh. Just something ive been toying with.


Pencils: 8 hours
Inks: 15+ hours

Critiques


:iconktwizard:
Where to begin on a piece as detailed as this one?

Technique is truly a prize performance within this lined work of art. As prior works have shown us, much can be done within the realm of black and white. Even in the lack of shadings, it is very plain to tell the time and depths of experience were poured into this. The precision done and detail formed into every figure, post, and even creature is astoundingly accurate, and well beyond a simple improvement with prior attempts by =arvalis.

Vision is superbly done as well. The rickety atmosphere of the mobile safe haven is truly expressed with vine covered stairs, cracked shambles of concrete, and of course, the near ragged garbed knights who watch over it. Yet all the while, you can tell what each and every merchant is selling, who is ready to buy or leave, who is their to protect, and who is their waiting to be defended.

Originality is sadly, the least impressive of the categories. There is no denying the artistic level of this well done work of art, nor the time spent to create such a piece, yet this is an idea seen in many books, games, movies, and even fellow deviations. However, to be fair, it is the first to boast the idea of being mobile in its civilian defending routes. On odd concept to consider, but with this deviation as proof, it has marvelous results.

Lastly the Impact. Such an image, with the detail and craftsmanship given to the work, it would be hard set for one to avoid closer inspection of this picture. Though a full five stars is not yet rewardable. Countless works in =arvalis's gallery show flawless colorings. If a piece such as this was given the master colors to match those works of art, avoidance would be impossible.

Overall, =arvalis has created a masterpiece that truly is able to speak for itself. Let the Shanty Town ride on.
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:iconrhiannercakes:
Wow.
This is amazing!
There's so much detail from the man's hair to the wearing down of the buildings.
It'd be amazing to see in colour.

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:iconjonosaurusrex:
HOLY MOLY ROLY OLIE CRAP :O that is pure AWESOMENESS! xD

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:iconravens-death:
i cant send you a critique but i would have to say color it so we get the vib of what is what. like if you color the fruit oranga and red we have an idea of what it is and then we get a better feel of the mood and story. same goes for the rest of the village/town/fortress thingy. ^^ but over all its good. mind if i ask what it is for?

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:iconarvalis:
I mentioned what it was for in the description.

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:iconravens-death:
ooops, my bad. im gonna go reread no...... :sprint:

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:iconphoenixblackstar:
This is awesome! You should have gotten A hell a 100, and they didnt well I say you should have raised hell about it.
:iconsolessfate:
omg, there's just so many lines, and there all so clean! There's so much beautiful detail that I have to lean back just to take in it all. This would truly look even more amazing if it was colored.
:iconcerberuslives:
Incredibly impressive detail as always, man. :)

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