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A new original character. More of him soon, been working on his design for over a month. Quick portrait sketch, all i needed fr now.


Photoshop CS3: 2 hours
New OC©RJ Palmer

Critiques


:iconskatora:
Dude, sketch-style = win!
I really love the complete-un-completeness of artwork like this; it gives it character as you can see the gesture of the lines.

There's an air of maturity about this character that demands respect. If he spoke, you should listen. Plus, you gave him such intense eyes; their darkness relates to the many secrets he probably holds.

This character seems, to me, to be the disgruntled-mentor-type. I'm not sure if that's what you were going for, but if I had to label him, I'd totally say, "He must be the Hero's unwilling martial-arts teacher." Am I close?

I don't mean to say that that he looks mean, but he seems very cautious, like he had be betrayed in the past and is unwilling to go through that again. But, you gave him soft lips and a smooth nose; so I can tell he's a nice person.

Overall, very nice and interesting character!
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:iconpaperphantom:
1st!...He looks like a monk:o
:iconakaisoul:
I like the direction your artstyle is taking.

Really nice face.

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Draw what you can't say.
:iconangelicadonis:
Cool! Very rugged looking!
:iconryuuhiken:
Hmm...a jedi?

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\"Upon the world we stand,the bringers of death,the ones whom call themselves,Ravens\"
:iconexuitirteiss:
This design looks pretty good.I like it alot, keep it up Arvalis.

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Kneel down before your lord and master.
I' do not wish to shed innocent blood..
I ' prefer my humans roasted , and burnt to the bone.




Humans annoy me...
:iconbeng91:
very nice
what can he do
:iconarvalis:
he has a jetpack and robot arm

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"If we are defined by our actions, and your actions are stupid, what does that make you?"
:iconarvalis:
will do =D

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"If we are defined by our actions, and your actions are stupid, what does that make you?"
:iconarvalis:
nope

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"If we are defined by our actions, and your actions are stupid, what does that make you?"

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