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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Also the clouds in teh far back really could have been done better than a few blobs. I think It would have taken only a few minutes more to make nice cloud like shapes op them.
Also the buildings look to flat you should have more time in giveing them details, the bricks look like fake cheap boards with a simple bricklike texture on them.
If you look at the image when in total it looks amazing, but you could really have taken more time to fix some minor things. It will make it from Great to Perfect.
The only thing thats not quite there is the people. What you have now is good, but it feels like there could be more crowds. Once you hit that wall in the middle its a ghost town and no one else wants to be above the third floor. Nothing high in detail, it would just be nice to see silhouettes like the airships, maybe an outline in the windows of the bridge at the middle ground. With all the activity going on in the sky you'd think to see more on the ground as well. And if you feel like it perhaps take into account the bird population too, like a finch or something on the statues hands or fluttering about with so many nesting spots for them.
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